- What is the claim?
- “Over complication of devices on automobiles is a major danger, and should be addressed with simple, proven old schools mechanical designs.”End of the introduction paragraph.
- Simplicity is better when designing automobile functions. Simple is safer.
- What support does the writer offer for the claim?
- Logic regarding complexity and how things are prone to fail. Statistics about deaths from malfunctions of electronics, and how they could be solved from simple mechanical designs
- Facts about car crashes and how proven designs last
- Yes
- How evenhandedly does the writer present the issues?
- The mention of how new technology is intriguing to consumers, but then the evidence showing that they don't really know what's for their own good.
- Responding to them reasonably and small refutes
- Somewhat dismissively, but still acknowledging the fact that they are logical in a business mindset
- Yes
- What authorities or sources of the outside information does the writer use?
- Uses magazine article to illustrate theories, and news cites to back theories with facts
- The hard evidence comes from reputable sources
- All Sources are within the last 5 years
- How does the writer address you as the reader?
- There is quite a bit of background information on things that need it
- There are basically rhetorical questions that the author asks the readers (inclusive)
- Yes it is strongly suggested that the author believes his thesis.
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